Appealing to the (Non)Reader: How Does Your Blog Measure Up?

by Sam on July 2, 2009

As a print journalism major in college, I was required to have a minor outside the School of Communications. When it came time to choose a course of study, I realized that journalism was on its way to becoming digital and having some computer skills would probably be good when it came time to find a job. So, I choose Computer Information Systems (which later changed to an equally unexciting name: Information Systems Management). I’m pretty good with a computer, I’ve always been a bit of a geek deep down, but I have never had any interest in becoming a computer programmer. Unfortunately, the majority of the classes offered towards my minor were geared towards majors, and thus I sat through months of Visual Basic, Perl, and SQL. Pure torture. Thankfully, I also learned HTML.

The next phase of my journalism/Internet education plan was to take a class called Interactive Journalism. It was without a doubt the most useful class I ever took. I have used the skills and lessons that I learned in every internship and job since. The premise of the class was to prepare us for the shift to digital, because writing for the Web is different. You can’t just take the same story you would run in the paper and stick it online unless you don’t want anyone to read it. Here’s the secret: Online users don’t read, they scan. So, content has to be tailored to catch the scanning eye. Some pointers:

  • Write an enticing headline that draws the reader in.
  • Keep your paragraphs short, and resist the urge to use lesser known words or jargon.
  • Make it a multimedia piece, including images and video whenever you can. This also provides interactivity, which online readers love.
  • If your story is on the long side, break it up by including a Read More link after the first section, and/or with a hyperlinked outline at the top of the page. Online readers hate scrolling on forever.
  • Along the same lines, divide the piece into relatively self-sufficient sub-sections, so that someone could read part of the article and still get the gist of what you’re trying to say.
  • Put key words in bold to draw the scanner’s eye to them, and use other formatting tools like the bullets I’ve used here.

I took that course three years ago, and I still remember all of this. Now, the point of this post is not to give a shameless plug for my university (Quinnipiac in Hamden, CT) or my professor (Richard Hanley)…ooops…the point is to consider how many of these pointers I have implemented on this blog. True, a blog is different than a news article on a publication’s website, but I have the same ultimate goal: to attract readers. So, how am I doing?

  • I try to write enticing titles, but they could probably be better.
  • I think my paragraphs are usually a good length, and I only throw in the occasional “big word.”
  • As for multimedia, I’m working on it, and the same for interactivity.
  • One of the reasons I switched to this new layout is because I wanted to break up my content more. There’s no easier way to lose someones attention than to force them to scroll and scroll.
  • Bolding is my favorite, so no question that I’m good on that one.

Clearly, these guidelines can be applied to a blog with some success. Obviously it takes a variety of things to reach your desired audience, but thinking twice about the way you write and the way your blog is set up could make a difference.

Do your own self-analysis. How many of these tactics do you employ on your blog? Do you think they’re worthwhile? Are there some you’ve never thought of before? What else do you do to attract readers?

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  • My writing style is very conversational. I think that helps in terms of relating to my readers, who are usually friends I'm keeping in touch with. :)
  • Suki, conversational writing is a great way to connect with your readers. Like I mentioned, big words and jargon often discourage people from reading your posts. Thanks for commenting!
  • Suki, conversational writing is a great way to connect with your readers. Like I mentioned, big words and jargon often discourage people from reading your posts. Thanks for commenting!
  • My writing style is very conversational. I think that helps in terms of relating to my readers, who are usually friends I'm keeping in touch with. :)
  • Raven, "insanely useful?" Wow, I'm glad you like them so much! But, I think your posts are long because you have so much to say. Like Elisa said, that makes length less of an issue. Thanks for commenting!
  • John, thanks for stopping back and sharing your perspective! I'm glad this post caught your eye!
  • Interesting. I probably go against the grain because I ramble and write terribly long posts. These are insanely useful...I think I'm going to look into incorporating these tips into my own writing
  • Raven, "insanely useful?" Wow, I'm glad you like them so much! But, I think your posts are long because you have so much to say. Like Elisa said, that makes length less of an issue. Thanks for commenting!
  • Interesting. I probably go against the grain because I ramble and write terribly long posts. These are insanely useful...I think I'm going to look into incorporating these tips into my own writing
  • Great advice, I especially agree with "Online users don’t read, they scan" as I am guilty of that myself. If it catches my eye, I'll read more into it, but more often than not, I only look for the highlights.

    Thanks for sharing.
  • John, thanks for stopping back and sharing your perspective! I'm glad this post caught your eye!
  • Great advice, I especially agree with "Online users don’t read, they scan" as I am guilty of that myself. If it catches my eye, I'll read more into it, but more often than not, I only look for the highlights.

    Thanks for sharing.
  • Haha, I'm totally feeling the English major pain here! To boot, I'm a creative writing concentration with a dual major in Latin Classical Studies. I should wear a tweed smoking jacket and drink dark liquors out of a snifter!

    One of the tings I found really interesting on Website Grader is that I get a lot of negative points for the "reading level" of my blog (currently high school, a bit ago it was post-secondary.) For awhile I tried to "dumb it down" and then I realized that just isn't me.

    I know that probably inhibits a lot of web readers from the Webb, and I'm sorry for that and still working on it! But I think there is something to be said for the deeper heavier reading of some blogs. This means the long blogs that actually have something to say, not just drone on for the sake of droning. I know (well, I THINK) I'm not the only one out here in the world that goes for stuff like that!
  • Elisa: Wow, yeah that is quite the combo! But, I think you did the right thing. Changing the way you write to the point that it's not you anymore isn't worth it. Also, I agree that if long posts are written well and actually have something to say then length doesn't matter as much. If you're sticking with the long ones, maybe try out some of the other tips. Thanks for your comments!
  • Haha, I'm totally feeling the English major pain here! To boot, I'm a creative writing concentration with a dual major in Latin Classical Studies. I should wear a tweed smoking jacket and drink dark liquors out of a snifter!

    One of the tings I found really interesting on Website Grader is that I get a lot of negative points for the "reading level" of my blog (currently high school, a bit ago it was post-secondary.) For awhile I tried to "dumb it down" and then I realized that just isn't me.

    I know that probably inhibits a lot of web readers from the Webb, and I'm sorry for that and still working on it! But I think there is something to be said for the deeper heavier reading of some blogs. This means the long blogs that actually have something to say, not just drone on for the sake of droning. I know (well, I THINK) I'm not the only one out here in the world that goes for stuff like that!

    <abbr>Elisa’s last blog post..You Spin My Head Right Round</abbr>
  • Elisa: Wow, yeah that is quite the combo! But, I think you did the right thing. Changing the way you write to the point that it's not you anymore isn't worth it. Also, I agree that if long posts are written well and actually have something to say then length doesn't matter as much. If you're sticking with the long ones, maybe try out some of the other tips. Thanks for your comments!
  • Haha, I'm totally feeling the English major pain here! To boot, I'm a creative writing concentration with a dual major in Latin Classical Studies. I should wear a tweed smoking jacket and drink dark liquors out of a snifter!

    One of the tings I found really interesting on Website Grader is that I get a lot of negative points for the "reading level" of my blog (currently high school, a bit ago it was post-secondary.) For awhile I tried to "dumb it down" and then I realized that just isn't me.

    I know that probably inhibits a lot of web readers from the Webb, and I'm sorry for that and still working on it! But I think there is something to be said for the deeper heavier reading of some blogs. This means the long blogs that actually have something to say, not just drone on for the sake of droning. I know (well, I THINK) I'm not the only one out here in the world that goes for stuff like that!
  • Carlos: Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this post! Length is only one of the factors, and I think there are benefits to both short and long. As I said to Ryan, I don't think I'll ever be able to write high quality short posts like you do, but that's okay. Always enjoy reading your perspective!
  • Well, you OBVIOUSLY know that I already agree with all this! (Short posts aren't a must, they're just a strategy, go with your long ones!)

    This is a plethora (big word) of useful tips, which I think every blogger should keep in mind. I hear everywhere that they like to put this and that in their blogs because it makes it prettier, or because it will attract more readers. But, like you said, digital rules are different. So many people don't want to accept this...

    Fantastic educational post, which proves that you can write about a lot of topics Sam, I'm looking forward to more of these!
  • Carlos: Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this post! Length is only one of the factors, and I think there are benefits to both short and long. As I said to Ryan, I don't think I'll ever be able to write high quality short posts like you do, but that's okay. Always enjoy reading your perspective!
  • Well, you OBVIOUSLY know that I already agree with all this! (Short posts aren't a must, they're just a strategy, go with your long ones!)

    This is a plethora (big word) of useful tips, which I think every blogger should keep in mind. I hear everywhere that they like to put this and that in their blogs because it makes it prettier, or because it will attract more readers. But, like you said, digital rules are different. So many people don't want to accept this...

    Fantastic educational post, which proves that you can write about a lot of topics Sam, I'm looking forward to more of these!
  • Wow, double whammy! I say go for it, a post with ridiculous verbiage and theory application would be excellent :)
  • I think about stuff like this quite often actually. One of the things I've tried to be more conscientious about is to supplement some of my long-form content with more shorter posts and interactive media (e.g. vlogging). As a communications undergrad, I could certainly write PAGES of stuff about NOTHING, but with tons of fancy words. My marketing background in grad school made me more succinct in my approach, but I still get long-winded sometimes. I try to keep these posts to once a week or so max. Some people like Brian Solis can pull it off.

    I agree with the vast majority of the points you've suggested. Brian Clark does a tremendous job of providing value with short, easy to digest paragraphs. Rebecca Thorman is great at highlight important points of emphasis.

    Sub sections are also a great tactic that appeal to the skimmers. The only one I think I usually disagree with is that annoying read more button. It's true that 1st paragraph has to draw you in, but for me that read more button is another step (like getting partial feeds in my reader.)

    And as I said on Twitter, I really enjoy the new layout!
  • Ryan: I'm glad someone else thinks about this stuff too! You do a great job of mixing up your content, and personally I think your blog is very visually appealing.

    You were a communications undergrad too? Very nice! I don't know, I think English majors probably have a harder time learning to write short, easy to read posts. But, I know exactly what you mean. Now that I'm working in Marketing, I've had to change my writing style a lot. Still, I don't think I'll every to be able to write short posts like Carlos. The journalist in me just can't do it!

    Interesting point about the read more button. I honestly think that it shouldn't be as necessary with blog posts as it is with news articles, if for no other reason than length. Thanks for your comments, and I'm glad you like the new look!
  • Well... Would it help if I told you that English was my minor?

    The shift to a more concise approach was (and still is) relatively tough for me sometimes. There are times I just want to spout ridiculous verbiage and tie in theory application, et al. (lol)

    And thanks for the kind words about my blog!
  • Wow, double whammy! I say go for it, a post with ridiculous verbiage and theory application would be excellent :)
  • Well... Would it help if I told you that English was my minor?

    The shift to a more concise approach was (and still is) relatively tough for me sometimes. There are times I just want to spout ridiculous verbiage and tie in theory application, et al. (lol)

    And thanks for the kind words about my blog!
  • Ryan: I'm glad someone else thinks about this stuff too! You do a great job of mixing up your content, and personally I think your blog is very visually appealing.

    You were a communications undergrad too? Very nice! I don't know, I think English majors probably have a harder time learning to write short, easy to read posts. But, I know exactly what you mean. Now that I'm working in Marketing, I've had to change my writing style a lot. Still, I don't think I'll every to be able to write short posts like Carlos. The journalist in me just can't do it!

    Interesting point about the read more button. I honestly think that it shouldn't be as necessary with blog posts as it is with news articles, if for no other reason than length. Thanks for your comments, and I'm glad you like the new look!
  • This is true, Sam. I see really popular blogs wit these kind of characters. Catchy titles, pretty layouts, not too lengthy...add some humor, witty words and pictures and they have tons more readers!
  • Andhari: Definitely, I've seen those too. I'm definitely not talking about changing your blog so much that it's not your blog anymore, just little tweaks and things to keep in mind.
  • Useful tips and it's so true about the scrolling!
    I think you're doing well at putting what you studied into practise.
  • Thanks, I'm glad you think so :)
  • Andhari: Definitely, I've seen those too. I'm definitely not talking about changing your blog so much that it's not your blog anymore, just little tweaks and things to keep in mind.
  • Thanks, I'm glad you think so :)
  • I think about stuff like this quite often actually. One of the things I've tried to be more conscientious about is to supplement some of my long-form content with more shorter posts and interactive media (e.g. vlogging). As a communications undergrad, I could certainly write PAGES of stuff about NOTHING, but with tons of fancy words. My marketing background in grad school made me more succinct in my approach, but I still get long-winded sometimes. I try to keep these posts to once a week or so max. Some people like Brian Solis can pull it off.

    I agree with the vast majority of the points you've suggested. Brian Clark does a tremendous job of providing value with short, easy to digest paragraphs. Rebecca Thorman is great at highlight important points of emphasis.

    Sub sections are also a great tactic that appeal to the skimmers. The only one I think I usually disagree with is that annoying read more button. It's true that 1st paragraph has to draw you in, but for me that read more button is another step (like getting partial feeds in my reader.)

    And as I said on Twitter, I really enjoy the new layout!
  • This is true, Sam. I see really popular blogs wit these kind of characters. Catchy titles, pretty layouts, not too lengthy...add some humor, witty words and pictures and they have tons more readers!
  • Useful tips and it's so true about the scrolling!
    I think you're doing well at putting what you studied into practise.
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